Friday, February 24, 2006

Black Silk Scarf Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once arrived from Beijing,
My mother and sister approach me,
heavy tweed sweaters wrapped around
their shoulders,
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Phillip Whiteman 01 March 2006

IT is alright. still not strong enough, it feels like you are trying for something instead of allowing the words and fluidity to come naturally.

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