Monday, January 31, 2011

Black Shuffling Cars Comments

Rating: 3.9

A crossing wind
flutters over the lawn.
A black car shuffles down
the street as
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Chris G. Vaillancourt
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Georgios Venetopoulos 18 February 2014

Good morning sir! I am impressed (for one more time) by the inventiveness of your mind. Your verse is bold and model. I am looking forward to read more from you.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 February 2011

ONLY HOPE IS FOR SALE..... Fantastic chasing with the wind. Metaphors and imagery are so brilliant, intelligence and emotion knitted by such a skilled word-artist....I put my choice high here (if machine carries my vote) . About the quoted line: Thank you poet for representing our existence during this time so accurately by such submissive and artistic way...simply matchless. Regards, pranab 10++++

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Kesav Easwaran 03 February 2011

strong...beautiful...picturesque

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