Sunday, October 12, 2008

Black Sheep... Comments

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In my families eyes i am a fool...
Never did well in school...
I might as well be gool...
In a bloody pool of their hearts...
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Onyx Blake
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Angelic Warrior 18 June 2009

that really sucks...and i feel the same way...only i'm worse i put on a show for my family to try to seem like i fit in but i don't feel like i do....they only congratulate me for the things i'm not proud of.....life sucks 10

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Onyx Davis 01 December 2008

i'm defintely gonna read more of your poetry

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Stephanie Dower 12 October 2008

I can totally relate to some of this. Great poem, thanks for sharing!

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Onyx Blake

Onyx Blake

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