Tuesday, December 16, 2014

Black Shadow On Earth Comments

Rating: 4.9

Black Shadow on Earth(123 children has been killed brutally in Pakistan-May their souls rest rest in peace)
A tribute

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Aftab Alam
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Piyush Dey 07 January 2015

Sir, this is a very powerful write. A curse on those who used the guns and played with blood. A stirringly powerful write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 January 2015

It's just cruelty, many innocent children became victim of terrorism. Very true said, in few lines... This is the time to awake, This is the time to think and rethink, Enough is enough, tears has dried, How long should I weep? A great poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 December 2014

Freedom from cruelty. Really aftabji, it is time to take actions against those who are going against humanity, the terrorists. Very fine writing.

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Heather Wilkins 16 December 2014

a great crime against humanity leave the children live and enjoy life

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 December 2014

Let us moan today-the Black Shadow on Earth killed 123 children in Pakistan Request to all write against terrorism, curse them, create voice against them- -

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 16 December 2014

It is a horrendous crime against the children and the entire peace loving world and a social message in the poem against terrorism.

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