Color of darkness,
Hue of sorrow,
Shade of pain,
Embodied in that bloom,
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original poem how love can be turned into a black void seen as a black rose with shades of pain well done indeed...regards
Love your expression of dead love. It's dark with a lot of meaning. I especially liked the last line: the flowers of dead love, adorned with the scars of a shattered heart, flourish those black roses. Keep writing. Thank you for your comment on my poem: Being Bereft, I greatly appreciated it. RoseAnn
what a true story bhind those beautiful lines..... I like, i like, i like, i like it.
Colour of darkness.... lovely beggining to a sad piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
OUCH, this is sad. But it affects the reader in me, so you are good at it. And the love between them was turned into broken promises (sigh) anyway, another good write from you.
Ah! ! This a very good write Ma'am! I really enjoyed! Black roses!
oh...i'll remember ur poem whenever i see a black roes after this...lovely. :)
It's an good love poem, an awesome poetic expression that you have.Brilliant!
A sad story beautifully written with such passion and understanding at his pain and sorrow! ! Superb wtite! !
Black roses symbolizing love that has died - very imaginative, and a great write.
what a perfect imagery of your black roses your words so amazing even this is a sadness poem brilliant..! ! !
The flowers of dead love, Adorned with the scars Of a shattered heart, Flourish those black roses. Beautiful lines!
This is amazing! I really liked the imagery and words you used to create a sad and sorrowful atmosphere. Nice job. Also, thank you for commenting.
Your black roses has crimson blood inside...it alive...do you know tht? _Soul
What a lovely poem, beautiful though painful sentiments.