Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Black Roses Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day I'll leave you a black rose on your door step.
You'll see it every where you go.
No matter where you hide it, it will always find you.
I hope it brings back the memories of you and I.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Rafael Cazares 20 July 2010

Good message, the black rose the rich symbol of grievance for a romantic companion. Brush up some of the misspellings and this would look nice.

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Iron Panda 23™ 04 March 2010

WOAH! ! FRIFFIN AWESOME! ! the title n everything! ! (the numbers on the voting pole should really go past 10)

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Peter Vector 10 November 2009

If only you knew how much this poem parallels to my life... The liars and cheaters... I'm glad that I'm not alone in these experiences, but if this happened to you, which I suspect it did, I am sorry and would never wish this upon anyone even my most vile persecutors... I give it a 10.

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