Fingers to lips
still alive but barely breathing
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Souren Mondal, thanks for reading, appreciating and commenting.
This is a real 'blues poem' for me.. The imagery is incredible (particularly of the vultures circling the heart) and the metaphor of the 'black rose' hits home to perfection. An incredible poem Anitah. One of the better ones I have read today.. Thanks for sharing..
Souren Mondal thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read. Wow thanks for the vote too.