Black Rose Comments

One among ma favourite dark poetries which ya've written... You rock.. \m/

Reshma! After quite some time I read your poem; read to full satisfaction..you are the best romantic poet here. (Secret: I saw once more at your photo to full satiscfaction) .

a blend of pathos and romance and physicality...

great metaphor, beautiful expression- very impressive Mamta

very enthralling.....great expressions....loved it...10

Black rose...a coveted dark desire, within the heart! ! ! ! ! ! captivating! ! ! ! ! !

Your first line sets a sombre tone to a this dark and mysterious poem about love and thwarted desire and the passionate agony of the dark side. The ABAB structure of the poem is original, the two B verses serving almost like a chorus. This is an intensely emotional poem which obviously comes from some personal experience. Just one tiny grammatical mistake - in your second stanza 'smell' should be plural - 'she smells like my last day'. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

powerful write....such feelings.. such sadness.... But must admit, it makes my heart sink just a little 10+++++++

a beautiful pattern...with a lot of beauty

there is so much between the lines........ 10+

a poetess assuming as poet and writing exact feelings of a man is wonderful. shan10

Very dramatic with a fascinating choice of words. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

this poem made me sad & scared too. u delivered ur message & emotions very well.10++

The form, the stanzsa, words and thought are exceptionally good. Bold as usual. You are such a narcissist.10+++++

A nice composition, reshma.......