Sunday, February 5, 2017

Black Red Banded Snake Poison Perfume Hair Pins Comments

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when you tire of snakes slithering beside your heals
become a medusa wear in your hair hissing snake fashions
beware snakes that bite seriously impair repeat dates
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Terence George Craddock
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Mj Lemon 06 February 2017

There's something magnificent about the diction here. Reminds of Hollies lyrics. And the idea that one can make lemonade when handed lemons, but done with snakes! This one lands on my favourites list!

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Terry Craddock 07 February 2017

Thanks Mark, this was a wind down fun to write, sometimes flippant remarks say the most.

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Paul Brookes 05 February 2017

clever and witty and allegorical all in one poem great thanks 10++

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Terry Craddock 05 February 2017

Thanks Andy, seemed a mythical legendary interaction, snake charming, the use of snakes milked for venom for antivenom, the Medusa seemed a movie theme popular culture concept fascinating as a fashion statement. Was a bit of light relief after writing 11 panic attack poems which seemed to need writing.

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