Friday, August 17, 2007

Black Raven Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is held hostage
Seeking refuge in safe haven
Fallen leaf from the maple foliage
Perching on a branch is a Black Raven
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COMMENTS
Lady KrimZen 28 December 2009

A very strong poem that contains great imagery and very poetic language. Although, it is a shame that this poem lacks punctuation; as this poem would be an excellent poem to read aloud. But, nevertheless, a great read regardless.

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Sandra Fowler 19 August 2007

You are a fine imagist. I like what you see from your window on the world. Write on, Ana. Warmest regards, Sandra

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