Monday, September 8, 2008

Black Petals Comments

Rating: 5.0

A petal as black as night can be
In it's petals nothing you'll see
With thorns sharp,
Your blood melds with the land
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Timothy Weiermann
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Ryan Thompson 16 October 2008

hey this is pretty neat good job yo!

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Brittany graviet 06 October 2008

so many meanings may be pulled out of this. very inspiring

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Anjali Sinha 05 October 2008

oops! ! ! ! thorns and blood ive been pricked my heart bleeds ++++++++++10 tim my dear fren always love anjalie

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

It is a good compositon, good imegery.

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Silence Dogood 08 September 2008

Its not bad but you should add more.

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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