Monday, November 27, 2017

Black Or White Comments

Rating: 5.0


...
Read full text

Dawn Novus
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

Absolutely a wonderful brief write! To me only the virtue of the object/entity matters irrespective of its color! You have taken a very nice concept and aptly presented just in one line! I call it arguably a great expression!

0 0 Reply
The Crow 27 November 2017

The White Coffee is obviously racist in trying to steal the Black Coffee's identity.

0 0 Reply
Dawn Novus 27 November 2017

While I gather my self from the floor...you Crow are completely rong..but I still will give you a square 500.

0 0
Dawn Novus 27 November 2017

Not only The Crow in name but also in naming name...but its the black coffee whose the thief! ! ! ha ha..he wanted the white coffees identity.10 for getting it half right my dear poet. Mwahh.

0 0
The Crow 28 November 2017

Don't you know the Black Coffee can't be wrong because they don't hold the power. It's a power play Loza. Having said that, I like my coffee with a little cream. What about the mixed coffee's?

0 0
Dawn Novus 28 November 2017

The white coffee can only be white where as the black coffee can add cream OR not...power play..its about choices my dear Crow. And anyway, its MY poem! So there.

0 0
Dawn Novus

Dawn Novus

New Zealand
Close
Error Success