Saturday, January 17, 2015

Black On White. Bingo! ... [creation Fantasy; God's Decisions; Animals; Medium Length] Comments

Rating: 5.0

When God had created fishes for the Sea,
but not yet the roots of Mankind's family tree,
He proceeded to make insects and reptilians,
including snakes, which flicked tongues from their grins.
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Bri Edwards
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Denis Mair 21 May 2023

Since the human mind demands explanations, there's no harm in playfully delivering one to us. Mythic stories may have a grain of truth, because they are drawn up from deep in the well of imagination.

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Valsa George 18 January 2015

One thing I must admit at the outset..... You haven't abused God in any way, but only tried to amuse everyone! This poem is quite different from your usual stuff.... but don't know how far it can amuse! Any way an interesting write where you have stretched your imagination to limitless heights and also strained to have the rhyme scheme perfect!

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Bri Edwards 21 May 2023

Oh, Valsa, my 'child', so kind and so mild, I thank you for so much and wish we could keep in touch, but, alas, PH you have fled to sites you less dread. ;)

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