Monday, June 19, 2006
Black Night Comments
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The night was wet as I recall
And missing my stop through drunken sleep
I had to wait till the driver circled.
People left, the bus thinned out
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Daniel Tyler
19 June 2006
This bristles with menace, who is the other person? Are they a rival suitor? The chlostrophobic setting of the bus makes the suspense all the more throttling. Well done.
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8/3/2025 4:57:23 AM # 1.0.0
That was brilliant. I thought that it was more different that anything I've ever read before. It's nice to find things that I haven't read over and over again a thousand times...the same things people write about...it's all good, but it gets tiring. This piece is unique, and that's what I like best about it.