They say we should see stuff in black N' white
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Good but let me let you in on a little something: Well, as far as poetry goes, rap is totally out. For what it's worth, I say you revision this one because I'm sure potentially it's a nice poem but practically, it needs further work. Thanks anyways. Take care, Mohammad
nice but could be better...thanks though, its pretty good