Saturday, February 9, 2008

Black Mystery Comments

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Lit by the shadows of the moon,
The beach recounts that dreadful night:
A night foretold by Winter’s bitter breath.
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~ Jon London ~ 10 February 2009

This is beautifully written fastastic imagery you have painted 10+ Best of health and happiness Jon

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Blue Eyes 20 November 2008

i love the images u use they r quite imaginative and interesting i like them a lot.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 February 2008

black mystery as when resourced by the faith of love, yet marvel by the gleams of faith that still gluimmer in the cold night of darkness, qute appealing, well penned 10+, thanks for shjasring

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Scott Austin 20 February 2008

This is a wonderful piece of work you have written. The feeling of mystery is felt by the reader. Thank you for sharing your work with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott

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Troy Clark 12 February 2008

I finally read your message, This poem isnt morbid at all baby blue, but it is a very nice write and trust me, i know morbid.

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