Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Black Memories Comments

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He carefully placed a black rose on her grave
It was perhaps his way of saying goodbye
He also added a card with a black ribbon that read
“For my departed wife as she embarks on a new life”
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Sandra Martyres
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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 November 2009

Hey Sandra! Your can certainly write a thriller.........why don't you try some novel....Very beautiful description and you maintained the suspense (though lurking from your words) till the end.............Terrific.

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David Harris 16 November 2009

Sandra, the guilty are always haunted by their crimes. They often feel that removing things that will remind them will rid them of their guilt, especially in crimes of passion which what wonders if this was one. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Patti Masterman 11 November 2009

Way cool! Had me fooled; thought he hated the memories because of his too-tender sensitivities..shows how easily life can fool us. Great story poem! You rock..(smile)

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Indira Renganathan 11 November 2009

Terrible...so much horrible events have become very common these days...and your way of writing on one such is very true to reality and poignant.....thank you and thanks again for your nice comment on my poem

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 11 November 2009

excellent narration there...you keep the reader in his toes

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