Saturday, October 25, 2008

! Black Magic ! Comments

Rating: 2.7

Black was always your favorite color...................
Like the inkwell that beckons the pen
Like the night spangled with a million stars
Like the sleek machine your ego rides
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Linda Ori
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Firehorse008 17 January 2018

DO NOT READ! ! ! ! YOU'VE BEEN WARNED! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Fay Slimm 01 November 2008

Linda this is a good, well constructed piece, and has the twists and surprises of the accomplished writer. Glad I chanced onto your page, and am looking forward to reading more from you......greetings from Cornwall.U.K. from Fay.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 October 2008

Quite apropos, for October, and Halloween, Midnight.Black as in Midnight Magic! You continue to knock-out premium quality work...arguably some of your best pennings, period! Now this is whati've been missing...Your talent for expression, when you decide to put your mind's-eye into your work...is as good as any of the top Poet's on this site...And that's that! So, no more sabaticals...got it? lol! fjr

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The BoOgsin 25 October 2008

great piece...i really enjoyed it even though i was caught off-guard by the end. P.S. i love your last two lines.

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Firehorse008 17 January 2018

I hate it but we have different opinons

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Corey Threet 25 October 2008

Great write I like the scheme of Black I honestly thought it would turn out to be a hate pome but it didn't for me. Great twist and always remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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