Monday, August 10, 2009

Black Is Not Enough Comments

Rating: 5.0

fairytale
happily ever after
if i see u next to never
there is no ever after
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Amanda Nelson 14 August 2009

10/10 You're right there is a lot of emotion in this one! I especially think the second verse is great. =) You have some major talent.

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Mystic Indian 10 August 2009

brilliant, gifted writing. please go through 'That Old Fashioned Thing - A ballad in free verse' and you'd find somethin uncanny :) 10/10

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