Monday, February 11, 2008

Black Is Beautiful Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every morning in the deep woods of the concrete jungle
With my near and dear ones I sing a coarse musical,
Humans raise from their good night sleep with a frown of unpalatable
They call me ‘Crow’ and express their acerbity with a scowl,
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Albert Wong 05 September 2008

Very beautifully write, logically process, words are so good selected. I like your poem, which is so natural in your type.

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Sreelekha Premjit 09 March 2008

This is a beautiful poem which shows the integrity of the poet as well. Most of us donot know the worth of what we despise.

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Andrew Blakemore 08 March 2008

Beautiful poem Vidyadhar, very well crafted. Andrew

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Nema Shama 04 March 2008

vision and imagery craft.black is indeed beautiful

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Suvikar Saliyan 03 March 2008

good use of metaphor.............

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Adryan Barnathan 02 March 2008

.......black is beautiful!

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Broken Peaces 02 March 2008

A very clever and inventive write 10 regards Chris

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2008

Black or white, the soul must be pure-This truth comes to my mind when I read this nice poem.

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rohit sapra 29 February 2008

It is a nice poem and we shouldn't ever be ashamed or be feeling sad about the way god created us. Everything in this world is beautiful even black colour and all that is required is to appreciate anything for its natural beauty.

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Melvina Germain 29 February 2008

I like this poem very much, Many would remember being that black bird. The only difference was, they were not as fortunate as the black bird in your poem, unfortunately it was a long time before they were set free. Melvina

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Tracker Ogryphon 25 February 2008

A very internal poem. The emotion shows in ways of fear and solidarity. But at the same time thanking God for its short commings in outside eyes. A Great write Thank you Tracker

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Saskia Harjono 23 February 2008

Very deep and beautiful..

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Rani Turton 19 February 2008

Highly imaginative poem with a unique theme. Well done and continue posting.

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Ojedokun, Adeola 11 February 2008

It's just beautiful................

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