Sunday, October 7, 2007

Black In The Water Comments

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there's black in the water
and no one can see it but me
I am the only one to blame
pouring my heart out so carelessly
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Jade Leven
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Maureen Hatwell 04 August 2008

The pain in this poem is universal and although it is many years since I felt the pain Jade describes, reading it brought back the feeling with great clarity. I shouldn't thank her for that but I do.

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