Black Holes Comments

Just surfing then site, found this poem, I like it

A great big THANK YOU to all who commented here. As this poem was last years POD (060317) I was surprised to see it selected a second time as poem of the day exactly one year later (060318) . Best Wishes to all, from Sydney. David Smith-White.

It is a brilliant poem on universe and life having vivid and stunning expression. Nice penmanship. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

My love for you was built on rock- - excellent expression- -beautiful poem- -10

I, too, enjoyed the smooth craftsmanship of this piece. Well-chosen words; an excellent rhyming scheme that bears the weight of the imagery easily and comfortably. You carried the extended metaphor consistently and engagingly. A very professional work of poetry. Bravo.

On a different plane! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Does my remorse exert a force, Inverse to troubled souls? Should I spurn the fleeting moment, For a lifetime of control; Or burn in fiery torment, As your anger takes it's toll? Wow, so nicely crafted. Every stanza is amazing and thought provoking. 10++++ and congrats for being picked POD. Subhas

Superb craftsmanship. The words and metaphors make the poem stand out. Congratulations for member poem place.

a brilliant poem of life's ups and downs and how things can disappear and then reappear out of the many black holes that we dig for ourselves? ............well written Dave

Dave, such a profound and splendid poem of the day... congrats for being chosen...a huge 10+++++

The form and content are admirable. Lovely and very passionate poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Excellent job. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing Dave and do remain blessed.

An awesome write, full of emotions and their steady flow deserving Poem of the Day. Heartiest Congratulations.

You've described your feelings in a unique way. Sometimes we experience such situations that make us feel that 'all exist in reverse'.

dave, first, i affirm the craft of this poem- it's good. on the ideas in it, it bears resemblance to my poems the bridge and on deceit, both with the same girl in mind who i treated badly. i like how you combine your confession with an exploration, if i read it correctly, of perspective in general. it appears you now realize, as i have slowly in my life, that in the lens of love is clarity, is truth. on this idea, if you're interested, please see my poem aging as ascent. i look forward to checking out more of your work. glen kappy

a lovely poem of the feelings one encounters whilst flying through space and our time? brilliantly written!

A role i could play! ! Thanks for sharing.

The journey of a troubled heart and concuss. great job Regards Tia

the journeys of a troubled heart and conscious. great job Regards Tia