Black Hole - Pupil Comments
Like a black hole, drinking in its surroundings,
No hesitation or fading hunger,
Endless streams of light swirling to its end
Absorbed in absolute darkness,
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Very elaborate comparison. Sounds like you are a biologist/astronomer turned poet skillful and thought provoking, not easy to accomplish
I thank you for your incredibly kind words, Im new to poetry so your comment really touched me, never been a scientist/biologist its just always fascinated me.
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7/28/2025 10:27:41 PM # 1.0.0
A novel idea - comparing pupil to black whole! ! ! beautifully written deftly conjuring images.Thanks for sharing....a heartfelt 10☺
Thanks for your encouraging comment payal, means everything to me, ive had this idea for many years and I know I can expand on this, thanks for reading and your heartfelt comment :)