Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Black Hearts Comments

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Black hearts
Are better then red
They bring out emptyness
And coldest dread
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Carrie Sprouse
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Ben Gieske 17 January 2009

I am reading your poems after reading Ahmad Shiddiqi’s poem, “Voyage”. Good use of color to express your thoughts and feelings. Nice contrast between black and red. Your rhymes always fit in nicely not distracting from the reading. The message is blunt, strong and clear.

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Silence Dogood 15 September 2008

A deep and dark poem but well written great job look forward to more

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Carrie Sprouse

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