Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Black Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Terror seized my heart when I looked at the Sun
And I hid from it
Terror seized my heart when I looked at the Moon
And I hid from it
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Vivek Jha
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Fade To Black 23 March 2009

love this one! keep writing

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Liberated by the light of love. Well written.

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Rituparna Choudhury 30 November 2008

good write...hope to c more of your compositions: -)

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Anjali Sinha 20 November 2008

nice --- a powerful write--keep sharing regards anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 16 November 2008

good write...expressive...words come off fluently, Vivek...well done 10

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Deep Samal 16 November 2008

gr8 one....sounds like the beauty & the beast! ! !

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very well written...can feel the emotional upsurgings and so the downfalls...keep up the good work

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Vivek Jha

Vivek Jha

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