Black Forest Of Ignorance Comments
We felt the forest before we saw her
Before our carriage cleared the bend
At dusk the meadow was still and solemn
The forest beyond the tall grass stood
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What a splendid description of the forest you have given and to relate it with ignorance, this is a great idea. Hatred and ignorance are indeed the biggest problems of the world. It's superb how you have made your point through the metaphor of the dark forest. But in darkness you can still find the light of the day....the poem ends on a very optimistic note after giving a dark picture. Excellent, fully deserving of 10.
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7/21/2025 12:18:29 AM # 1.0.0
Edmund, such an apt write for TODAY: Couldn't have said it as well as you have. Love your pen. A 10!