Black Eye Comments

Man art is good but painful feeling, a good combination altogether

A marriage is no boxing ring A marriage is no politics of scorpion king A marriage is no story of traumatized wife A marriage is a definition of pure love and peace/// excellently expressed in this stanza about the marriage and it's characteristics; though sometimes I feel the marriage is the torture cell of two independent minds yet here it feels that mutual understanding can make this marriage heaven; congrats for being selected this poem as POD..........5*******

Oh my God! Absolutely shocking, captivating imagery. Well-done!

A painful and hear-rendering read, no human being should ever have to suffer the pain and abuse and indignities of this kind, especially from someone who is suppose to love you. This is not just a poem but a horror story of suffering, I wish this is a cruel fiction but the reality is to easy to bare. Thank you Alison, I wish you safety and happiness.

" A defenceless woman" ! Be very strong with the truth! ! ! Never give up on your dreams! No matter the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A heartfelt empathy described here, loved the following lines: 'Hardcore practicing on a defenceless woman' - aptly describes the abominable, savage act. 'I feign in fear the beast in you may return' - Detestable! Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

Thanks sis and stay safe. Write more poems so we know you are safe

I see you smile sometimes looking at me Never seen shame in your bullish eyes I feign in fear the beast in you may return great poem. tony

Black eyes of a often forgotten tale of whoa.....

Black Eyed, the nights were once so tender, tender, do not surrender to those broken dreams.

Very touching narration of the tug of war between realities and expectations from a married life. Congrats on the poem of the day.

A beautiful poem on marriage and domestic violence. Yeah, marriage should bring love and peace rather than hatred and violence. Nicely crafted. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.

I see you smile sometimes looking at me Never seen shame in your bullish eyes I feign in fear the beast in you may return Excellent

This is a very good poem.

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! 5 Stars full vote. On behalf of the milliards women who have been abused, are abused and still being abused. A very touching poem, excellently worded and very convincing, mostly based upon true occurrences in own life. The first experiences started with ourselves, no? A brilliant thought-provoking poem, I enjoyed reading the scintillating words. Thank you so much for sharing.

A wonderful poem of tragic circumstances. Congratulations on poem of the day.

A well executed poem of the day. Truly heartfelt. Congrats on your featured piece.....5 stars*****

Deluke you have become my perfect fan, thank you pal

Great poem full of emotion. I hope though you write on behalf of the thousands of abused women and not about yourself. Because sis if this is your situation cut loose and let the monster go. If he doesnt want you we do here on PH