Black Dawn Comments
Eyes in the night watching her
Everything is unstable, what a blur
Cold breaths and hidden cries
Black dawn with immortal eyes
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awesome pal.fabulous... first i wanna say what a nice contradiction of the topic.BLACK DAWN..wow... actually i enjoyed alot of the dark theme and the dark style of this piece of art.if we leave the prince and princess alone and accept them as lovers, the contradiction between dark and bright is really somehting.actually the rhyme and the meaning are superb too. welldone...and i voted 10++++ cheers~nb
awesome pal.fabulous... first i wanna say what a nice contradiction of the topic.BLACK DAWN..wow... actually i enjoyed alot of the dark theme and the dark style of this piece of art.if we leave the prince and princess alone and accept them as lovers, the contradiction between dark and bright is really somehting.actually the rhyme and the meaning are superb too. welldone pal...and i voted 10++++ cheers~nb
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7/22/2025 2:09:34 PM # 1.0.0
very nice poem...great work..and labour..