Black Darkness Comments

Wow, this is a great write there are so many ways I took this. Dark, brooding yet so much pent up emmotion in this. Wanted more at the end. Nice job.

lots of meaning too this poem well done

Woah, that was really creepy, but in an artistically beautiful way. I don't know how to feel after reading that. I have felt like what you read before though. I can tell you put a lot of emotion in this one.

Love the way of your describtion.... So well Written... Good one indeed..

well written, shows deep emotion love it X3

'The horrible stench of blood and burnt roses', that was just so beautiful, i loved this line! ~ Hazel G.E

Amazing imagery entwined with brutal bruntness. Keep on writing! :)