Black Curtain Comments

exellent piece Beth, It's good to have another dark poet on our side.

A clever taste of Darkside verse.Mellifluous stanzic movement, throughout. [Just a constructive comment: Fifth stanza..line1.... Do you mean '''aweful'''...as in awestriking, or is this a type-o of the word '''awful'''? I only ask, as with the theme, you have chosen...both terms would easily apply.You might want to choose a an alternative word to ensure that your fine work is construed as you want it to be. Otherwise...stellar work, young lady...Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ FjR ~