Black Crow Comments

aww! ! ! thz really sweet. almost spelled sweet wrong. whoopz. i like how u brought the flawz and mistakes of humankind without pointing fingers while still pointing out the beauty of life even in some of the more annoying or 'repulsive' (lolz) formz.

you made a focus on life of a bird very beautifully, giving clues as we sometimes in our life think about them as they are never useless creature.....great write

very good im really impressed

Hig honour for a humble bird. Well done my friend. It is always excellent when the voiceless can be heard via great poetry.

Well done. You worked hard on this.