Saturday, August 26, 2017

Black Corset Comments

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Dry sultan air like a dead cave
She crawls with magnificent pain
Numb bodies gather like crows
Thunderbolts of gothic armor
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Joseph Narusiewicz
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Captain Cur 26 August 2017

Bravo! Tremendous finish! I am in love with a pirate, her sate eyes despise me, one of many great lines in this poem.

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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