Black Coffee, Wednesday Morning. Comments

Well structured Neil, a wonderful write and full of insightfulness

your poem read so well, not only that you manage to keep the reader from guessing what will happen, of course I thought that the man in the poem was going to attend a show, or something that she was in. Then I reached the last line and everything seems so very different. The pity i felt for the lady was suddnely poured onto the man. You excell at what you do Neil, and that is write great poems. Best wishes and much respect. Vincent