Thursday, February 5, 2009

Black Coffee Country Comments

Rating: 4.5

Pencil character sketches drawn on napkins,
greasy finger prints on doorhandles.
with the smell of diesel
in the vest of the stations attendant,
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nathan martin
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Ivan Ho 01 July 2009

Excellent line, 'his mile markered memory worn thin' I thought you might dropp a few words for Starbucks or even Seattle where they came from? Overall - 7 to 8 (as if I can tell a good poem...) Ivan-Ho

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Charles Chaim Wax 05 February 2009

a perfect picture of life going on and on

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