Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Black Coffee Comments

Rating: 4.5

This venerated Stimulant
Stoutly Potent to the vascular system
Encourages a benign dependence
For junkies of the professional persuasion:
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Kevin Patrick
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Khairul Ahsan 05 May 2014

It's a good poem to read. The poem draws an imagery that is visible and plausible to all. You have rightly cautioned us against over indulgence in black coffee that 'can often result in a crash Leading to a lethal fatigue No roasted bean can permanently cure' - Very well said! Above all, I like the last two lines, superb!

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Mxolisi Ignatious 15 January 2014

I Quote ''This Black Brew Needs Apothecary, Thats Why I Much Prefer A Cup Of Coffe'', Great Writing, I Enoyed Reading It That I Wished It Was Continuing For Centuries. Keep Them Coming Mr. Patrick

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