Sunday, September 7, 2008

Black Coffee Comments

Rating: 4.5

It's as black as his teasing eyes
Captivating when he simply smile
Aromatic as his fragrant musk
A scent that could wake me up
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Jerry Hughes 15 March 2010

..........lucky him, I hope he deserves you? Fondly, Jerry

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Akram Awadat 25 June 2009

lovely poem, well done thanks for Coffee

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Well.....from one '''Black Coffee Enjoying''...PH member, to another...This is fine work, indeed, young lady......Metaphorically mellifluous! FjR

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

Nicely expressed the state of drinking coffee, the last lines are nice.

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