Black Bustles You! Poem by Muhammad Adnan

Black Bustles You!

Rating: 5.0

Eyes echo in endless vale
Ears whisper too in the shadow of black clouds
Hair twisted like smoke boast and tell a tale
Nose-like Jehlam Hills appears in stunning dale,
Palm-like soft tissue play hide and seek
Glowing cheeks cheer like Helen of Greek
Eyebrows remain cool
Vibrant visage fouls the fools,
Little lock lits at ear
Tinny pattles rattle fear
Black robe bamboozles horror
Stunning smile sips care,
Ask her!
Eyes echo and voice
They are the holy messengers
Embrace and face the choice
Remain pure and ever transfigure.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a vivid and imaginative portrait of a person, weaving together a tapestry of sensory details and metaphors to create a dynamic and captivating image. The language is rich and evocative, with a focus on the emotional and intuitive. The poem explores the themes of beauty, mystery, inner strength, and purity, using contrasting images of light and dark to create a sense of depth and complexity. The subject is portrayed as a powerful and alluring figure, with a strong sense of presence and identity. The use of metaphors, such as 'Hair twisted like smoke' and 'Nose-like Jehlam Hills', adds a touch of whimsy and wonder to the poem, while the repetition of 'eyes' and 'voice' emphasizes the importance of communication and connection. The tone is one of awe and appreciation, with a sense of reverence for the subject's beauty and strength. The final lines, 'Embrace and face the choice / Remain pure and ever transfigure', suggest a message of empowerment and transformation, encouraging the reader to embrace their own inner strength and beauty.
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