Black And White Kisses Comments

I have to agree with Shannon very and deep and the ending is amazing how he say his name after death. Keep up the jod work

I love your ending, it's very beautiful! I love the he tells his name after you have already kissed him. This is a beautiful poem that I truly enjoyed, This poem has inspired me to come up with 3 poems ^.^ I'm glad I read this! Thanks for sharing Hon! ~Hazel G.E

Wow, I love the story telling of this poem. It was long, but I wanted to keep reading to find out what happens at the end. I thought it was cool how you waited to say it was death until the very end, but I had a hunch that was what you were referring to.

It is very deep and wonderfully frightening.