Sunday, June 24, 2018

Black And White Cows Comments

Rating: 4.8

Nine black and white cows
Graze on a lush green pastures
Boys watch from afar.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 12 April 2023

Economical use of words, but the message is the best.Cows do no discrimination, but man, on earth is expert discriminator.Man does all hateful sins, others serve man.Thanks to your poetic acumen Mam., ,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2019

Those boys must be the cowboys who have to bring back the cows to their stable. A serene country's scenery, that will stay in our minds. Thank you so much for sharing this picture-perfect scene. A 10+++++++++++++++++++ vote

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Betha Crawley 24 April 2019

I love the created images.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2018

Nine black and white cows Graze on a lush green pastures Boys watch from afar............iimpressive depiction. Beautiful poem.10

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Indira Renganathan 23 August 2018

Watching is a nice pastime....your poem gives a pleasing effect....little cute poem 10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 July 2018

This is an amazing little poem that takes my memory to lush green pastures where I was a part time cowherd in my school days (because I was not good at studies) . I could not just guess, out of 9 cows how many were black and how many were white? Whatever may be children must have enjoyed it...Full marks!

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 29 June 2018

An excellent piece of artistry, the beauty of having readers analyzed and interpret in many forms the poetry given.10+

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Savita Tyagi 28 June 2018

In nature all colors mixes together. Wish we could say same for humans. Great metaphor.

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Robert Murray Smith 28 June 2018

Another beautiful imaged write. A painting in words.++10

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Mr.Mister 27 June 2018

I can see a lush green pasture with black and white cows. Great picture!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2018

I think it's a metaphor, perhaps the poetess means a number of black and white girls are enjoying an outing somewhere and a few naughty boys are watching them from a distance. The poetess knows better, but if they are really cows then instead of boys bulls should have watched them.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2018

There is an internal meaning in black and white cows. The are grazing together. The aren' t feeling touchability or inferiority like men. A great write.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 June 2018

Black and white cows are grazing together and boys are looking from far ... black and white just color of skin but can grazing together cause may they knows - they are same inside but we- the human race- grazing haughtily with upside! great writing....10+++

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Kostas Lagos 25 June 2018

Beautiful pastoral image.Great!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 June 2018

An outstanding haiku, ate Rose.....10++++++

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Rini shibu 24 June 2018

A thought provoking poem.. Black and white together

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 June 2018

Hi Nice poem...enjoyed reading

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Bill Cantrell 24 June 2018

Ok my friend, this ones over my head but I’m not very savvy to what others grasp without effort, but it sounds so cool,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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