Thursday, July 31, 2014

Black And White! Comments

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Closed my eyes in sigh
An exquisite land of darkness
Darkness that propagates and controls
Impede all the rays on the lane
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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2014

Wisdom wears the white gown But emotions dip it in black shade Lovely lines but it depends upon the nature of emotions, sometimes emotions make it a rainbow. A beautiful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2014

Thoughtful flow of words....Very true said in few lines..... White on black shine for a while Black on white blot always Our life is often black or white. Both represents opposite nature. Both are the sides of same coin.... Loved the way you differentiated white and black in this poem.

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Black and white sides of life where only wisdom can have its wise ways........so nicely said in beautiful words

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Piyush Dey 31 July 2014

wonderful write. a lot of different things one can learn from this poem. enjoyed!

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