Saturday, December 7, 2013

Black And White Comments

Rating: 4.8

White dazzles my inner divide,
Black thrown in with my unruly side,
My parents wave me a lingering goodbye,
They have always nurtured my childlike soul,
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Hazel Durham
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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2022

Great lines exquisitely rendered with artistic brilliance. Totally resonates with my convictions. Thanks for sharing this inspirational fragrance with us. Remain enriched.

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Khalil Gabol 22 December 2019

Beautiful and captivating, read my poem " She whispered to her friends " Regards.

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Sarah Shahzad 11 December 2019

realy truly, & great words..! ! like your thoughts on this... pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my site 2 :)

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Denis Mair 10 September 2019

The polarities of white and black take on philosophical significance because they sum up the contradictions that we move through. They are not the final story, because their stark contrast only dominates when joy falters, but you fight your way toward the vantage point of joyous color. Excellent.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

I try and climb to a great height, To discover a view, that I can never see, .../// beautiful poem penned let me climb the inner ladder let me discover the lighter by which I see all brighter.......///

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James Mallum 11 June 2019

What a contrastingly eloquent expression.

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Dipak Adhya 22 March 2019

In a world full of colour so bold, I'm painted black and white, ...well written...expression....

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Julia Luber 13 February 2019

strong poem about the poet's own personality facing the world with clear black and white definition

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Jankovic Zoran 26 January 2019

Don't worry. Black and White is true colors. Other colors is only make up of nature.

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Very good poem...with stunning expression....thanks

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alan brown 28 September 2018

A very interesting poem Hazel.Your world being only black and white will be an ongoing challenge. I hope that in future days a little bit of colour will prevail.Loved the poem. Alan.

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Tom Allport 20 August 2018

A wonderful write of how one can see one self? But it is not always how others see you! ..........well penned Hazel

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 July 2018

Living is a struggle with silent screams of turmoil Great write, Hazel... I vote 10

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alan brown 07 April 2018

enjoyed reading your poem Hazel.Alan

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A very well written poem Hazel THANK YOU FOR SHARING MARIO ODEKERKEN

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Muzahidul Reza 22 July 2017

White dazzles my inner divide, Black thrown in with my unruly side, , , , , , , , , , , , , Two sides of life are clearly depicted in these two lines wisely, ...... In a world full of colour so bold, I'm painted black and white, , , , , , , , , dear poet these two more or less entangle human life and you are also not out of these two, ........................ I try and climb to a great height, To discover a view, that I can never see, I bounce back into a fantasy of nature holding my hand, Accepting my limitations, ............. through these lines dear poet you yourself have agreed to our limitation, ........ All these have formed your poem is an extraordinay one, I thank you for this great share,10

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Richard Wlodarski 30 June 2017

This poem is filled with profundity and exquisite imagery. A joy to behold! Thank you for your heart-felt words so eloquently executed. Hazel, may you rise to heights of greatness!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 June 2017

Black and white finds the curious light, That shimmers with substance and dances across the page in ink, I cross a a wide bridge that is my link, To dissolving the empty divide, Like the certainty of the incoming tide.... great write with high imagery. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Khalid 10 March 2017

The most beautiful poem by Hazel Durham.congrats mam..

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Chinedu Dike 22 February 2017

A well texted, well thought out poem.

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