White dazzles my inner divide,
Black thrown in with my unruly side,
My parents wave me a lingering goodbye,
They have always nurtured my childlike soul,
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Beautiful and captivating, read my poem " She whispered to her friends " Regards.
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The polarities of white and black take on philosophical significance because they sum up the contradictions that we move through. They are not the final story, because their stark contrast only dominates when joy falters, but you fight your way toward the vantage point of joyous color. Excellent.
I try and climb to a great height, To discover a view, that I can never see, .../// beautiful poem penned let me climb the inner ladder let me discover the lighter by which I see all brighter.......///
In a world full of colour so bold, I'm painted black and white, ...well written...expression....
strong poem about the poet's own personality facing the world with clear black and white definition
Don't worry. Black and White is true colors. Other colors is only make up of nature.
A very interesting poem Hazel.Your world being only black and white will be an ongoing challenge. I hope that in future days a little bit of colour will prevail.Loved the poem. Alan.
A wonderful write of how one can see one self? But it is not always how others see you! ..........well penned Hazel
Living is a struggle with silent screams of turmoil Great write, Hazel... I vote 10
A very well written poem Hazel THANK YOU FOR SHARING MARIO ODEKERKEN
White dazzles my inner divide, Black thrown in with my unruly side, , , , , , , , , , , , , Two sides of life are clearly depicted in these two lines wisely, ...... In a world full of colour so bold, I'm painted black and white, , , , , , , , , dear poet these two more or less entangle human life and you are also not out of these two, ........................ I try and climb to a great height, To discover a view, that I can never see, I bounce back into a fantasy of nature holding my hand, Accepting my limitations, ............. through these lines dear poet you yourself have agreed to our limitation, ........ All these have formed your poem is an extraordinay one, I thank you for this great share,10
This poem is filled with profundity and exquisite imagery. A joy to behold! Thank you for your heart-felt words so eloquently executed. Hazel, may you rise to heights of greatness!
Black and white finds the curious light, That shimmers with substance and dances across the page in ink, I cross a a wide bridge that is my link, To dissolving the empty divide, Like the certainty of the incoming tide.... great write with high imagery. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Great lines exquisitely rendered with artistic brilliance. Totally resonates with my convictions. Thanks for sharing this inspirational fragrance with us. Remain enriched.