Black And White Comments

Very good. Liked the balance. Two sides to every argument.

Crunching good poem. read it three times and still not tired of it.

that was amazing one poem with two views of the same situation yet both so different good job

Doom and Gloom - 'Beware the stranger bearing gifts', as you show us with this powerful ironic piece. Blessings - Cheryl

Great poem. A complete contrast of perceptions, that to the two parties are their reality and their truth concerning what they are doing, but yet so conflicting. Good job

Excellent work, excellent, a natural born poet i see. -Beau

really nice and true poem....

The truth is so Black and White in this poem.A Great and interesting way to express the yourself on these issues. Keep sharing 'Sunshine! ! '..((Smile)) .......and Have a good day regardless of the darkness that exists around us. Take care of U'''''''' =Shelley=

true picture of the world.....great work...

Great poem, very clever and says it all about the world today. Cheers, David

the poem is here: You took our lives so we could see. That in this life, nothings free what's free anyway?

A completly amazing poem. Very well put.Its just sad that this is whats going on in our world now...

Excellent perspective. Nice work on the re-use of words in the second verse.

Very powerful. I just wish it were not true. It conveys a message which is most relevant right now. I only wish more people would realize what is happening.