Monday, July 25, 2011
Black And Brown Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Making my way down town
Fully aware of mams’s Bantu time
I see a man in black and brown
In my fears I started to drown
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7/25/2025 5:19:46 PM # 1.0.0
You write very well, however I believe you need to abandon the rhyming scheme it gets in the way of your story. You shouldn't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming. Your poem is excellent without it.