You write very well, however I believe you need to abandon the rhyming scheme it gets in the way of your story. You shouldn't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming. Your poem is excellent without it.
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You write very well, however I believe you need to abandon the rhyming scheme it gets in the way of your story. You shouldn't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming. Your poem is excellent without it.