Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Black Comments

Rating: 5.0

Black as night
felling tense all of a sudden
like parilised cant move
I see blood coming out of my scars
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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

like a ballerina dressed in black forced to twirl for an eternity waiting for something to happen open your own door let your heart sing for me to hear

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Linda Brooks 16 June 2008

I want to help you through your depressed state but some times words can only make it worse.

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Serenity Prayer 04 June 2008

i feel that way bout someone too. you put your feelings into good detail and i can understand how you feel even of i didnt feel that way bout someone. very well written. keep up the good wotk.

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haha, told you i would comment, i like it, it does make semse. You tell how she wasn't there when you needed her the most and that you feel all sad dark and gloomy... am i right? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? kaila x

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