Black 1 - Protected By My Black Talisman Comments

That beautiful light in the dark tunnel of mind! A clever, well rhymed, write!

(2) It is only through this 'Black Mind' a man can bring about complete transformation within himself and from there to the outside world. Thanks, Geeta ji. Profoundly articulated poem.

Just to get hold of the threads of the series, I thought it prudent to revisit the poem (Black-1) yet again. Mind is believed to be finicky and fickle and we take it for granted that unless it is tamed, we can't exercise control over our thoughts and actions and to strive towards 'a lighted space... a visible area... to hear a sacred sound' and to have some kind of enlightenment in life.

This is indeed a great introspective poem with a philosophical touch. Each one of us tends to have a defense mechanism deep inside us and this Black Mind is one such thing- a wall - 'a protection against every fiend'! Thank you for sharing such a probing piece of poetry.

Black mind is protection to every kind of thing. Very amazing idea is shared with T alliteration. Lighted space is very kind. Treading toward lighted place is wise idea to get exact knowledge. We all wait to hear sacred things. Tending to soften life mesmerizes mind more....10

Hi Geeta, Finicky minds try to cling to anything they find; they repose their on anybody who offers solace. Be it a talisman or the dirtiest rogue. Lack of self confidence is the reason.Well-developed story. Giving you an insight into the psyche of a Black Mind. Nice work.10++++

Wow! very creative and a descriptive write. keep up your creativity. take care and have a blessed day.

Of my black mind! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.