Bittersweet Tragedy Comments

I feel the sadness. More strong writing. I don't know if you need the quotes around phrases, sometimes, and I think there's a typo-'dogs OF hierarchy' makes sense to me.

' I wonder if you know how it murdered me to watch your eyes roll in disgust as you said: ' this is blaspheme! ' in reference to something I had titled love.' I relate to this poem on so many levels. The daughter, the sister (who's supposed to be a saint) the lover, the friend.. This really can apply to every aspect or meaning of the word 'relationship' Excellent writing. Always, Amberlee

Is this your father? ? Hugs Jan