Sunday, September 20, 2009

Bittersweet Love. Comments

Rating: 4.9

Your sweet golden darts
............................... penetrate my soul.
They strike any shadows,
................................... cull and replace
...
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Fay Slimm
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 September 2009

Poetry and love lift the soul ever higher :) 10

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Eyan Desir 27 September 2009

The flow was sweet as the poem itself 10s

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Carol Gall 20 September 2009

golden darts excellent fay 10

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Catrina Heart 20 September 2009

Oh for eternity love will survive.....well bonded well framed.great poem Fay! ! ! 10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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