Bittersweet Goodbye Comments

I dont see anyone trying to take their life, I see a women who has loved only to be stabbed with the person that you are in love with and taking your love and spilling it on the pool of life, it hurst for a long time, and in reality you feel dead, but the hurting stops, you learn to breath again, this is a very deep poem look forward to reading more.

Very deep indeed..its like a deep dark ocean, not all fishes in the sea are excellent and brilliant swimmers, but they survive...not all antelopes in the bush are good runners but they survive..

They old saying is when a person wants to commit suicide they don't really want to kill themselves they really want kill the one who hurt them the most but can't bring themselves to do it, so they kill themselves. There is no satisfaction in death, just death, and all the horror that lays in the darkness, never ending agony. Please think twice, there is another way, you do have options, but only while you are still living. Thanks for sharing this very deep poem. Keep penning :)

Justice comes for them all in the end. A very powerful poem.

Powerful and pognant too sp. Your talent is so evident. Great work.

I Loved You I loved you, and I probably still do, And for a while the feeling may remain... But let my love no longer trouble you, I do not wish to cause you any pain. I loved you; and the hopelessness I knew, The jealousy, the shyness - though in vain - Made up a love so tender and so true As may God grant you to be loved again. - Alexander Sergeyevich Pushkin Woe to those that love and lose to maybe love again... c...

A soul explosion, a tragedy revealed, a justice waiting to become a reality....blessings....

Wow, loved this....Nessy x

turbulance and turmoil.. relationships... love.... and then bang its OVER... nice write.. (best served cold)

Nice! Sounds like 'justice prevailed here. Very nice!