Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Bittersweet Comments

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When I'm lonely for your voice
I reminisce of the times we're together
It is bittersweet as it is our choice
to be with each other some times than never
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Aqua Flower
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Sandra Feldman 12 September 2018

All out love poem. Nothing hidden. Love in its fullest and best feeling. Beautifully written and far reaching. Very nice.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

It is bittersweet as it is your choice. Intimacy grows with hope and love. Some perception in life are bitter and some perceptions are sweeter. We behold both and gain experiences. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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Aqua Flower 14 September 2018

Interesting that you quoted the line It is bittersweet as it is YOUR choice. I rewrote that particular line before posting it but what you wrote was the original line (the truth) How'd you know? :)

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Carl Roussell 12 September 2018

A gentle intensity in this poem - a good write.

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