Wednesday, August 2, 2006

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Bittersweet
And I fell
Laughing, crying
Another song
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A.J. McKinley
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Ben Gieske 26 March 2007

Excellent choice of title which repeats itself in each stanza. Very well executed.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 31 August 2006

that was cool the way you like wrote it i really liked it cool. Lylyanna

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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